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Chapter 3 - THE WOMAN WHO THOUGHT NO ONE WOULD CARE

At first, I thought she was just passing through.

She came walking along the shore with her phone held chest-high, camera facing outward, talking in that bright false voice people use when they believe strangers are background scenery for their content.

“Okay, guys, the lighting is perfect today,” she was saying. “I swear this beach would be completely aesthetic if people didn’t keep cluttering the frame—”

Then she stopped.

Looked down at Noah’s castle.

Frowned.

The trouble was visible before she spoke.

“This thing ruins the view from my blanket,” she said.

I stood up immediately.

“My son built that.”

She turned her head toward me like I was interrupting something important.

“Then your son should build it somewhere else.”

“It’s not bothering anyone.”

She laughed once, short and dismissive.

“It’s bothering me.”

Noah had gone still beside the castle.

He was clutching the little flag so tightly the stick bent in the middle.

I took one step forward.

“Don’t touch it.”

If she had kept walking, everything would have ended there.

Instead, she raised her phone slightly, like she wanted better footage, and kicked the nearest tower.

Noah gasped.

I shouted, “Hey!”

But she kicked another one, then drove her heel straight into the highest wall.

The whole thing gave way.

Water rushed into the broken moat.

The front half of the castle collapsed, slid, and was taken by the next wave.

People nearby had begun turning.

A couple on folding chairs lowered their drinks.

Two teenage girls near the water stopped talking.

An older man under a red umbrella muttered, “What the hell?”

But the woman was smiling faintly, not at Noah, not at me—at herself, reflected in the black screen of her phone.

Only after it was ruined did she finally look at my son.

That was when he whispered, “I built it for my dad.”

And she said, “It’s just sand.”

There are moments when a crowd starts to change.

You can feel it even before anyone moves.

The beach had been full of detached strangers one minute earlier.

Now it was full of witnesses.

And the woman still didn’t understand that.

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She thought the story was about her inconvenience.

She had no idea the people around her had already started deciding who she was.

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